Thursday, February 8, 2007

Second Stab

So, you end up with a couple of sentences now:
I am exploring alternate points of view in characters of Shakespeare's "The Tempest" because I am trying to find out how the similarities between plays of this era and modern gamer culture can be applied in order to help my reader understand how seemingly archaic concepts are still relevant and interesting.

I am producing a game aimed for the preteen/teen reader.

1 comment:

pweil said...

Great - your second sentence is missing a noun. You are producing a ______ for the